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Little Goldfinch---added a stanza |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Little Goldfinch there’s a little goldfinch short and stout nibbling at the feeder head in and out pecking at the morsels that are gifted for sure feathers gold and black is his fine allure joined he by a friend or maybe a foe destined to repast on the perch not low swinging in the breeze a fine gentle sway nibbling at the morning commencing the day puffing out their feathers insulating the cool eating like they’re famished wonder if they drool wish that you could see them all lovely and fine swinging to and fro on this porch of mine Cat on the sofa sitting with a grin wond’rin’ what they’d feel like fluttering within. ©August 4, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (08-04-2002 05:46 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I have three finches. Amos, Annie, and Ana. This is a lovely poem about these tiny little birds. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
oh my, that added a lot to the poem. A little wicked ending. I like it. Though I'd never let this mean ole cat here dine on my little finches. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, don't even think about getting near them Sylvester! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love youn so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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