Open Poetry #21 |
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A Sountrack to the Score |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... ![]() |
What will I do? Should I go to you? What need I to do? Should I sit and stew? You've gotten me thinking, you have me brooding. You have me wanting, you have me craving. Out of nowhere, truly, I swear, together we face this bear needing each other's care. I smile when I see, you simply be. I would sit in a tree and watch you be. No, no, more! A soundtrack to the score. Of myself I would pour to keep you from being sore. We carry our weight while we wait. We wait for our mate while we carry this weight. Timing is everything a delicate thing, and precious thing, and wearisome thing. Our future together, what could be better? As one might be better. Though, truly better? We wait for leading, we cry out pleading, we cry out needing, while we wait for leading. Rest, my dear. Be of good cheer! Together, my dear, yes, together, yes, you are dear. 8/4/02 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is a marked simplicity in this, and I do believe I heard the music, as you have scored a ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
There was no broken record here, it was a delightful piece. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Always a pleasure to read your words!!! Loved it!!! *hugs* Kris |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay!!! Ooohhh...I too heard the music reading this, this would make a lovely song I'm sure, may she always be her for you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
Enjoyed your write, and I also could hear the music. ![]() |
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PoetryIsLife![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Thank you all, so much. ![]() Sincerely, Titus ![]() |
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