Open Poetry #21 |
In Knowing |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In Knowing Where do I start when I speak from my heart, Does my soul step in to then intervene? Are my intentions as clear as they seem When from the depths of my feel, I impart The words of love I would speak from my heart? How can I know that the words I implore Leave you replete, your desire to explore Was now to end as you would have before You all that you might need, forevermore, Do you hear my sweet, that I love you more? Impractical questions muddy my mind Your eyes won’t rest until they have found mine Your hand grasping fingers that you would entwine Electric feelings run rampant, to find My soul’s center, as lips silently bind. In winding join, with meld of spirits’ songs Coming to the point where we both belong No turning back, from this what is not wrong Intensity grows, willingly, and strong no other love, we’ve known this all along Where do I start then, to speak from my heart, Does my soul step in to then intervene? Are my intentions as clear as they seem That you are all I need, forevermore, Do you hear, my sweet, that I love you more? ~*~ Artist: Stoyanova Repost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
beauiful tribute to love If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You never cease to amaze me in the depth of your words or the many paths which could be taken from them....the mark of a true poetess. A very gifted one... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!!... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Romance is so becoming on you, Lady! This feels like it came from another time. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wonderful verse, dear Lady... with a wonderful message.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
how could I not hear my heart fairly sings with love you are the author Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms whyte..you do huggy stuff like naughty lady with gloves on lovely romantica ms |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Nicely Romantic, Lady. I would like to see more like these. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, and may you always know how much he loves you and that he will always love you ore each day, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very beautiful romantic poem, Lady In White. I enjoyed every bit of it. ~ hugs from a chipmunk who loves poetry Lyra |
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