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Precious Metal Couple
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Precious Metal Couple |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Man with the golden gun copper shoes, tapped to work nothing to lose Meets a silver lady walking her tarnished dog gives her the right of way its a lady not a hog. Can't change silver into gold but the two would combine, am told to form amalgrams of great distinction keep the upper class from sure extintion. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (06-15-2002 01:57 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ecrivan A clever write, enjoyed the read. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
enjoyed reading this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
think using the metals to describe certain traits is clever too  thanks for sharing! |
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