Kiss me...for a special guy here...he knows who he is...I hope

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Open Poetry #21

Kiss me...for a special guy here...he knows who he is...I hope

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

0 posted 2002-08-03 12:31 PM

Ravaged whispers
while the mountain
disappears into the night
and
lightning flicks the stars
from their velvet shelf
her throat, captured by desire
struggles to release the
ravaged whispers from
lust swollen lips,
kiss me...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-08-03 12:34 PM

This is very good.....and I hope he knows
too......Surely not a message that should
ever be missed by another.....

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-08-03 02:50 PM

Intense!!!! I agree with Magnus, I hope he sees it!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-08-03 11:35 PM

DeaDi, You keep knockin' me out. This is
an intensely romantic piece.
Very lucky fella, indeed!

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-03 11:50 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is wonderful, I too hope he sees this, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2002-08-04 04:22 AM

Can not resist...a kiss...James

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

6 posted 2002-08-04 09:36 AM

I enjoyed the read, and look forward to reading more.

The kiss would be as moist as dew
The passion wild as rivers flow
An ecstasy that neither knew
And heaven where you go

Sincerely
Rick

Enjoy your kiss x

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

7 posted 2002-08-04 09:48 AM

Awww so intense and sweet.

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-08-04 09:54 AM

WhileIWasGone~

'lightning flicks the stars
from their velvet shelf'

That is simply delicate creative imagery~
Lovely ... lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-08-04 11:56 AM

WhileIWasGone - great romantic write. Hope he knows who he is also, must be special...

BC

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