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When I Was Walking
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When I Was Walking |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN I WAS WALKING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Once when I was walking in the deepest forest, I found a leprechaun, who had just surfaced… Granted me a few wishes, only just wanted some, of peace and serenity, love that wouldn’t abandon… Something to hold onto, deeply, perhaps forever, a closeness never known, nothing, to ever hamper… Once when I was walking in the deepest forest, he promised I would find, one who was the warmest… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (08-03-2002 11:21 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling here... even in the darkest shade of the deepest forest, one can find the warm... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC ~ I hope you found that warm heart to go with yours. You never know what's just behind the shadows of the forest. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Me too, Bill..me too: peace and serenity, love that wouldn’t abandon… |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Aye my friend, I say to you As a Leprechaun I shall do one wish I give to you today one wish for love to ever stay. Nice write BC... |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice work... Enjoyed much DeaDiAmore |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Bill, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I loved walking beside you in this forest saunter of a gorgeous poem! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed reading this Bill! Thanks! Neeraja |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Not only was this write sweet and romantic, but aye, it was well written. Great length, meter, flow. Much enjoyed. A beautiful write, Bill. Sincerely, Titus |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, I think you may have been given a touch of the Blarney in your wish. Wonderful words. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ If you see him again please send him my way... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
BC I liked the fairy tale told here, sounds like you were having fun... thanks again, Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very cute and sweet poem. May beggars ride! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Might I borrow your leprechaun? This is nice, Bill. Whimsical, yet touching. Sandra |
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