Open Poetry #21 |
They're Coming to Take Me Away... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I got a dog, his name is Spot, But a spot, Ol' Spot ain't got, Spot's black as night, without no moon, And Spot is crazy as a loon. Ol' Spot, he thinks that he's a rock, So I took him to a doggy doc, The doggy doc done probed and checked, Then he done tol' me, I suspect, Ol' Spot ain't loco, from some strange planet, Spot just thinks, you take him for granite. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I was looking forward to Spot with spots but this does fine..got a smile from me |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I am smiling and laughing my head off. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tim~ LOL-ing at you~ Think this one might get you ten to life ! (unless you know a judge up close and personal) *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Spot ROCKS... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim Doggy psychology is the newest thing...This was really a cute reminder that to love is to be loved. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love this.... very cute.... Nan I love your dog thing LOL how cute is that ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I love this. You'n'me could be spotting our dawgs together. I would never take you for granite Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
LOL..I loved this. Poor ol' Spot needs some attention. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... I love this!!! *G* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
this was a ruff read!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
HaHa HeeHee Hilarious, Tim! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What's worse...now I can't get the SONG out of my head... |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Yuk Yuk Yuk....too funny! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Tim....I write poetry like this too....I'm enjoying my stay here at Crayola Country Institute....do you have any aqua colored crayons?...I ran out yesterday....wanna draw a picture of a lake and a boat and sail away for the weekend...what ya think?....Loved the poem spot, granited, I think you belong here...but still liked the poem...sincerely, Franklin Delano Roosevelt.. [This message has been edited by Toerag (06-19-2002 02:57 PM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this one! Nan |
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