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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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The Loop Without vision or reason, it’s easy to point to fate, there is no real clarity — why I circle you. Others come, pass into sepia memory; a chain, a tender shackle, brings me back to you. Another cycle, we spin, ignoring sizeable snags, oblivious to the trouble the loop might bring. We hold this orb up, turn it with moist palms as if a prize waits inside, coming round to claim us. © 2002 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (08-02-2002 07:42 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yay, oh Corinne, lately I have felt a great sense of gravity and down-to-earthness in your wonderful poems packed with true wisdom and heart, I love it! Yes, when it feels like something is hopeless and it never stops revolving around us, joy is inevitable and will come to us as we keep spinning on the axis of life, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"a tender shackle" My favorite line. Stunning! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Cool Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Diane Coway Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 61USA |
I am always amazed at your writing. You are so good, and now even better.....I am glad you are still here my friend.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ A delicately stunning write .... You are poetess in growth~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Amazing how some things seem to come full circle back before us...and we wait... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne I love the way you snag a thought...and wrap it up so perfectly...makes me just shake my head...and say ahhhh. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"sepia memory" now that's great writing. . . wonderful Cor. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Corrine - great writing. I like you thoughts... BC |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly for your responses! Cor |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sometimes it's just right, isn't it?.. Nice write, C...  |
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