Polish The Water...I gave it a shot.

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Open Poetry #21

Polish The Water...I gave it a shot.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-02 02:37 PM

The lake is not spectacular.

Simply the color of topaz
gleaming in the sun.

Oh but when the wind is docile,
the sunlight reflected just so
as to polish the water,
then we witness a sparkle
reminiscent of
the finest jewel.

WhiteRose

Love seduces joy from the heart

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-08-02 02:41 PM

Your simple "shot" scores points with me!

Said if I only could ...
-KB

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-08-02 02:49 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2002-08-02 03:11 PM

White Rose, there is nothing
simple about this at all...it is quite elegant!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-08-02 03:14 PM

WhiteRose~
And a lovely jewel it is~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

5 posted 2002-08-02 03:23 PM

The poem reflects your talent!

Neeraja

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