Open Poetry #21 |
Catching teardrops - for Mme Chipmunk |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
My dear Chipmunk, I learned from you so many things humor and strenght are two So when I feel bit down my friend I'm always thinking of you You let them tears come rolling down I'll catch them one by one And if I feel you're captured in I'll lay them in the sun The sun will dry up all sad tears And you'll be free again To let them tears of laughter out They will be ink to your pen I'm so really, really happy you've decided to come to Florida dear friend, my hugs will be warm and plenty. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (08-02-2002 06:36 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Sweet thoughts galore! I love it! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Big knuffles to you sweetie, and to our little Chipmunk too...and will share the tears too. Nothing means more to me than faith, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, ooohhhhh...I can't wait to hear of your adventures in Florida, I know you will tear up in joy, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Titia, this is beautiful, for a dear friend. Sandra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Titia, the sentiment in this is so heartfelt. Very nicely penned! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Titia, we shall all be here for Lyra.. to catch her tears and pray. This was a very loving thing for you to do. ~Big Hugs~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Titia Such a beautiful words for a much loved lady. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
are angel tears sad? no they could never be that nectared dewdrops to be swallowed by thirsty sunlight not all tears are anguish joy tears are the best tears of all! Impressively written, Titia, and expressive of a great friendship tSR |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
beautiful writing, Titia. You tell her! We''l show her a good time in the Sunshine state!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for the lovely poem, Titia... I really hope that my health stays good so that I will see you in Fla..... ~ can't wait to meetcha hugs Lyra |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks friends, and Lyra I'm just counting on seeing you in Tampa dear lady. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beautiful, Titia~ Love Bumps ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Titia, Thank you for expressing so well what many of the rest of us are feeling and thinking. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Titia, lovely tribute. I hope we do catch up with Lyra if not I'm sure she will be in our spirits "won't you my little chipmunk?" Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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