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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
 Sear It’s that warm, damp stick of feel, where evaporation doesn’t and winds won’t move tendrils curling from this face they're swirling… it’s that tepid torpor that slugs day, morn crawls to noon, day creeps in haze, vapid inspiration lags even the dog can’t cough its gag, and flies buzz lazily. Portray me as a salt lick that would illustrate my density, possibly add to imagery if you’re inclined to salt… there is nothing sweet this day that molasses could hold up to, far too lazy in moments sprawl no, molasses will not do… so there is nothing but leg and limb limp in the sultry summer swarm of sear, sullen throated swearing that no winter cool will prescribe again this heat of day… But then you come with browned iced spree and fancy that!, you thought of me… so, sit and sip and slip into a juleped thrill and think of winter and its chill. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Refreshing thoughts! Simple, and great! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms deca sip the slick of suggested samples, seems sultry soothing in such sin-seared sensual smolder was so cool ms |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's that warm, damp stick of feel, where evaporation doesn't and winds won't move tendrils curling from this face they're swirling ================================== Portray me as a salt lick that would illustrate my density, possibly add to imagery if you're inclined to salt there is nothing sweet this day that molasses could hold up to, far too lazy in moments sprawl no, molasses will not do So there is nothing but leg and limb limp in the sultry summer swarm of sear, sullen throated swearing that no winter cool will prescribe again this heat of day =================================== Oh good grief...this one is a smoking.... Decca my girl...where have you been haning? Down by the bayou?  This is Mardi-gras heat!! Summertime humidity and sultry skin breezes.. "Portray me as a salt lick that would illustrate my density, HAVE MERCY...wheres me Gator-aid Very very nice write Ms Decca...love the heady mix of rhymes, alliterations, assonance and heat. Mind if I keep this? Merci  Tell me we belong together |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
so there is nothing but leg and limb limp in the sultry summer swarm of sear, sullen throated swearing that no winter cool will prescribe again this heat of day… But then you come with browned iced spree and fancy that!, you thought of me… so, sit and sip and slip into a juleped thrill and think of winter and its chill. -------------------------------------- Why yes Ms. Deca!! I'll sit with you on the verandah and sip a mint julep with you... we'll just dally away the sultry summer afternoon. YOU sizzle girl! ~Hugs~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Deca dear Lady, do you know how you brighten my day with your sunshine? Would love to sit and sip with you in this heat. So good to see your words again... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
The heat flames in this write, my lady. I need ice! Excellent! Shenachie |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Get another glass, I am on my way! That is exactly the way it is here right now and I just finished mowing the yard....and I look like a drowned rat after swimming across a raging river! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, you light these pages with passions sunbeams always, this is exciting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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