Open Poetry #21 |
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Twixt Dark and Dawn's First Light... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Do you know the special time, just before the dawn, When parents sleep and children dream of fairies on the lawn? As dark and light in silence meld, at start of night's retreat, And creatures of the day await, pink blush of sun's first greet. What if one could stand cacooned within that special time? Forces of both night and day enwrapped in joy's sublime, Within the fields elysium, no fear of shadow's bite, Without the pain of searing sun, on wings of angel's flight, But, alas, comes forth the day, with passing of the night, And special time's of joys sublime, are lost to day's first light. [This message has been edited by Tim (06-15-2002 12:49 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love this...... *s M |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is stunning Tim and so captures the time between dark and dawn. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Very beautiful and expressive! A fine piece of poetry this is! Love, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...Yes!... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What a lovely peaceful feel to this. Of course, I know those kind of moments can happen in the waking hours...but the edge of fantasy that can occur in the dream world is a lovely moment to ponder. Enjoyed this poem immensely! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhTim~ This is incredible~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
*sigh* perfect. I love this time of day, especially when you are by the water. exceptional. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Soft peaceful images! Nicely done!! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
it makes me smile. ![]() Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~Can't believe I found this,...I just love it! -- That secret, precious time between the two, you've captured it wonderfully,...you've stirred in me the rushings of it all, the wonder and magic of this world. Thank you. *Peace. |
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