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Struggling My Way (my lousy no E's debut)
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Struggling My Way (my lousy no E's debut) |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Struggling My Way (No E's Challenge) I run with all my might in this dark of night knowing...your trap will still lay on its victim From within a struggling soul I shout, I cry out loud For though my spirit is fighting on my body is giving up ... I think of a bird with no wings to fly ... Oh Lord, lay your hands upon my plight Say I put not a losing fight At this brink of my captivity I will, I can stop for you, just to pray that a Saviour's light will show His way ~I hold no doubt~ slowly, gradually, vividly In my sight a doorway's built A soothing call of comfort stirs in my soul... "Afraid not my child, Walk through it with a stronghold of faith knowing I stand awaiting to hold your hand" [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-03-2002 12:24 AM).] |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Have no doubt and your fight will be sucessful. Faith does wonders. There's a peace inside us all |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mycafe...An excellent verse with no E's at all! I am amazed! Astounded! And I still use E's! Wasn't easy, but you DID IT! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mycafe Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree with Sunshine. Excellent verse with no E's. Love seduces joy from the heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
mycafe - wonderful write without the E's. Tried it myself, but no luck yet. It's tougher to do than one thinks... BC |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
baerlon, I totally agree with you, a leap of faith will take us through! Karilea, oh thanks so much. Your generous comments lift me up a great deal, ya know!  Seymour, thanks for dropping by and said that you've enjoyed it. WhiteRose, I'm humbled by your comments. Thanks! Bill, it was a bit tricky at first, but later on, I realised I really loved this challenge.  mycafe Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-02-2002 12:59 PM).] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Lousiness? Where?! Said if I only could ... |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Nothing lousy about this...great poem! Not an "E" in sight. Impressive response to the challenge.  Shenachie |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wow, very impressive, I enjoyed this very much, great write. Regards, Olias. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
There is nothing lousy about this poem. Very well done....Ya dun gud!!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! ***BRAVO***  How did you say so much without that amazing non-consonant? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
what an astounding account of holding on to faith...... indeed well done. Jason Daniels Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . this is just totally amazing mc. . . it flows, it has rhythm, you can follow it. . . an amazing work. . . truly, I think that you put much thought into this, and it shows. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"In my sight a doorway's built A soothing call of comfort stirs in my soul... "Afraid not my child, Walk through it with a stronghold of faith knowing I stand awaiting to hold your hand"  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Marie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am sooooooo proud of you, this is breathtaking, know Jesus will always love you and will always happily take your hand and show you loves hope! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
bsquirrel, I am jumping with joy that you couldn't find it!  Bridget, thanks for your words of encouragement! Olias & Magnus, I really appreciate your comments! Thankie! VAS, you just bravoly did a reply without using that 'E'! Ouch! now u made me say it! Jason, thanks. God bless you too! Sven, but of course, it's your challenge and I've to put some thinking into it, Appreciate your comments a great deal!Noah, yes yes, Jesus is the light of our life ! mycafe Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-03-2002 04:36 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyCafe~ This is WONDERFUL ! What a beauty ... challenge or not~ You did a GREAT job gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marie How very clever and well written was this piece. You passed with flying colors! Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very nice work...enjoyed much. DeaDiAmore |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
E's.I don't need no stinking E's.Cool poem too. paladin |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This must have been done with smoke and mirrors. It ain't possible, I tell ya!! Good job, No, Great job! ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A great job, Marie... I have been afraid to even approach this challenge... You did terriffic!!!!!!! ~ hugs of bravoLyra |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Once again, a BIG thank you to all my wonderful friends! marie@mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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