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akira
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since 2002-07-13
Posts 79
Idaho

0 posted 2002-08-02 03:00 AM





I can’t change how I feel
My desire for my dream is real

But I can’t have what I seek
So I often hide the tears I weep

You want me for your wife
That makes me committed to you, for all my life

I must forsake my quest to gain
What I cant have, continuing to seek it
Will only bring me
Pain

But it’s etched deep in my mind
So I struggle to let go and pray you’ll be kind

I’m giving up all I’ve sought
For love is more powerful, so I’ve been taught

It hurts to let go of my wishes
But I forget it all, when I feel your gentle kisses

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Written by Akira
Copyright 2002


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[This message has been edited by akira (08-02-2002 12:31 PM).]

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baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2002-08-02 04:32 AM


It hurts to let go of my wishes
Bit I forget it all, when I feel your gentle kisses

It always hurts but life is always waiting for you.  It may be hard but you have to do what your heart tells you.  thx for sharing

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2002-08-02 10:52 AM


Without dreams we are nothing. Hang on to them. They make us able to deal with reality on a day to day basis.
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