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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2002-08-01 07:24 PM

Writ and taunt,
grit and flaunt
a dying pun
upon my hand.

My arm, a flaw
to bring guffaw
a lying sun
upon the sand.

My hold, your daunting
bold and strong,
a writ without
a soulful song.

No rim or raisin to
my writ.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

[This message has been edited by Chanson (08-01-2002 07:56 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-08-01 07:25 PM

Very cool

Cold hands means a warm heart

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2002-08-01 07:26 PM

It was fun! Thanks loner *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

3 posted 2002-08-01 07:31 PM

reason this
why not to smile?
tears or grins
of a crocodile?

In mourning light
I sea you best
button your coat
fasten-ated test

One from column A
A Column to be
or have we already
forgotten our own mythology?

foregive me, La Petite One
I am eaten up with silliness
and devoured by shame
jeff

[This message has been edited by ShadowRider (08-01-2002 07:31 PM).]

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2002-08-01 07:33 PM

Eaten and devoured? That is fine as long as you don't eat the eeeeeeee's! *L

I'm feeling silly too. *s

Thank you, my friend.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2002-08-01 07:46 PM

you sing your songs so sweetly

hugss
M

(it was fun wasn't it)

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2002-08-01 07:51 PM

Ahh, thanks, M. It sure was! *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-08-01 08:25 PM

'Zactly!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-08-01 09:09 PM

(smiles) Yay, you did it! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love your wonderful style, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dorene, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-08-01 09:13 PM

Nice....you did well....and I think the
title is cute.....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2002-08-01 09:15 PM

Luv this!
~Hugs~

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

11 posted 2002-08-01 11:00 PM

Thanks folks, one and all! *S

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2002-08-02 03:56 PM

now this was just too much fun. . .

good rhythm and words. . . it was good to look at. . .

*btw, I'm trying not to have "you know what" in my responses. . . LOL*

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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

13 posted 2002-08-02 04:00 PM

Thank YOU muchly for issuing this chall.....enge (DRAT! I had to use it. I just had to. *L)

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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