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Gentle Hands
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Gentle Hands |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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A knock so soft to catch the ear and bring a start to one’s own soul. A knock upon the door to say I wait, I wait till thrice bell tolls. Evening paints a lazy moon and brings a gift of passion’s light. Smiling in wait of your answer as clouds drape the orb of our night. Was not for the moment my dear when my heart beat ever so strong in the fleeting thought of capture to ravish and love the night long. I bring to you my lustful heart and wine to free the timid mind. I give to you a chance to feel a potter’s hands gentle and kind. Within these hands a mold shall form a gift so treasured soft and fair. As touch does sculp of warming flesh, lips share a taste from vintage rare. Till light does take the moon to bed and dark does crawl away once more. I’ll lie silent and gently shed a tear not blue beyond the door. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh this is truly lovely. *sigh* What an enjoyable read it was. A wonderful way to start my evening. Thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do like the concept of a lazy moon... slow smiles here... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I love it Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SWOONING UP HERE IN SWELTERING CANADA!!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Barry, this is so very lovely, sweet friend, this reminded me so much of that beautiful scene of Ghost with the potters wheel, may with gentle hands a life of happiness be sculpted on the wheel of life, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank youn for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Oh so lovely this is, Magnus. mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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