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*Sweet*n*sexy*0803*
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since 2002-08-01
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0 posted 2002-08-01 04:49 PM


You Think

You think you will
But really you won't
You think you know me
But really you don't

You think you know
Every secret abotu me?
Some people don't understand
That they never will see

There are things you don't know
Things you wouldn't have dreamed
On the outside it appears the perfect life
But its ripping beneath the seams

Don't say you understand
Or you know what I'm going though
Until you know exactly what I'm thinking
And that probability is very few

Most things appear differently
Than they really are
And sometimes I feel my life fits
Into this description by far

So don't say you will
Because you most likely won't
And don't say that you know me
Because chances are, you don't

© Copyright 2002 *Sweet*n*sexy*0803* - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-08-01 04:50 PM


So true

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
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2 posted 2002-08-01 04:51 PM


On the outside it appears the perfect life
But its ripping beneath the seams

Very true for a lot of us. I enjoyed this one too.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-08-01 04:52 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I understand this feeling too, sweet friend, sometimes many people tend to judge a book by its cover and you deserve to be known and loved for who you are inside! (sigh) I wish you the best, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
4 posted 2002-08-01 06:58 PM


Wow..I can definatly relate to this! I love how you write with such truth and emotion..

If you are going through a rough time, I (along with everyone here at Passions) am more than willing to do anything I can, or just be here to talk to.

I liked this poem a lot.

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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