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Open Poetry #21

To Write Of You

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-01 09:30 AM

I know right now
you need to know
what dwells inside
this simple rose.

What it is
I feel for you?
Where you fit,
what will I do?

I can only say
right here and now
I'm not sure when
or even how
I'll come through
or what I'll feel
if what I know
of love is real?

So please be patient
please be kind
while the confusion clears
from my mind
and then I'll write,
I'll write of you
right now this just
will have to do.

WhiteRose

Jason
Member

since 2002-07-31

Posts 72
Macon, GA

1 posted 2002-08-01 11:48 AM

White Rose
Like the flowery name suggests, this is simplistic beauty. Like nature's flow of life, there's a natural flow of thought and words in this sweet poem. I enjoyed reading this.
Jason

Practiced in the Art of Perception

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-08-01 03:07 PM

I love this poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

ryun33
New Member

since 2002-07-20

Posts 8

3 posted 2002-08-01 03:19 PM

simple and sweet, and the flow..
it flows like water!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-08-01 08:46 PM

Such simplicity is saying so very much
and expressing feelings so well....

Nice one WhiteRose....

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