Open Poetry #21 |
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I Am……………Here |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
I Am……………Here last night I heard you couldn’t sleep slip into my arms I’ll sing a lullaby you can keep a song about tomorrow where you can forget your sorrow sung so you have no fear do not worry valentine I am here |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw...this is so beautiful! I wish I had someone like you, I have lots of insomnia ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish I'd read this last night...sigh. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Helen... Your words just dance down the page so beautifully. ~Hugs~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Yes, tomorrow is another day |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy ![]() |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is very sweet. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A very sweet poem!!! Neeraja |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, very sweet, one can have valentine's any time of year, eh?! would you mind doing me a favor...I have a poem below with the title "Hey!" I think that it is a surprising verse, given the title I gave it. I really need a title that will pull the reader in, which so far, the one chosen has only pulled in one. It's really about writing. Would you mind checking it out and giving me a couple ideas, if you get any. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Interesting write, enjoyed the read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - last night I lay awake in thought. A lullaby would have been nice... BC |
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Krishankins![]()
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I'm sure you have a voice that would make the Sirens envious. Wonderful! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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