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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-01 06:19 AM



I Am……………Here


last night
I heard
you
couldn’t sleep
slip into
my arms
I’ll sing
a lullaby
you can
keep
a song
about tomorrow
where you
can forget
your sorrow
sung so
you have
no fear
do not
worry
valentine
I am
here


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-08-01 06:22 AM


aw...this is so beautiful! I wish I had someone like you, I have lots of insomnia
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-08-01 08:43 AM


I wish I'd read this last night...sigh.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-08-01 08:47 AM


Lovely Helen...
Your words just dance down the page so beautifully.
~Hugs~

RSWells
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4 posted 2002-08-01 08:59 AM


Yes, tomorrow is another day
vandana
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5 posted 2002-08-01 09:53 AM


enjoy
WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-08-01 09:54 AM


This is very sweet.
Neeraja
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7 posted 2002-08-01 10:37 AM


A very sweet poem!!!

Neeraja

VAS
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8 posted 2002-08-01 10:42 AM


yes, very sweet, one can have valentine's any time of year, eh?!


would you mind doing me a favor...I have a poem below with the title "Hey!" I think that it is a surprising verse, given the title I gave it.  I really need a title that will pull the reader in, which so far, the one chosen has only pulled in one. It's really about writing. Would you mind checking it out and giving me a couple ideas, if you get any.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2002-08-01 11:08 AM


1slick_lady
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2002-08-01 11:09 AM


helen - last night I lay awake in thought. A lullaby would have been nice...

BC

Krishankins
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11 posted 2002-08-01 01:01 PM


I'm sure you have a voice that would make the Sirens envious. Wonderful!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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