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ryun33 New Member
since 2002-07-20
Posts 8 |
ok.. here is wher it is, it's in the glare, the stair... walking distances thru the blankeness so unaware, so.. i sit and share what i have in my breath of air, lookin at a portrait i..!! stair.. blankness it's what, for who to care it's curious that your standing right there.. listening.. sitting or something, watching, frightened..of something.. wondering leaping, conclusions, so i left and fell off i jumped the dock sliped out, or what i thought at the time cause it was what it was in the relavince, so i ponder i doze off.. laying in the dark, throwing my emotions over boats- not floating even in the saltee sea, i try, i lie, i deceive my own- human beeing, a portrait of things unseen, from the out poor of unsettle dreams i don't remember, do i care why don't i- remember i repeat.. crashing hoplessley to my defeat.. i am my own worst enemy i see, fight club ain't got nothin on me.. i deceive, i lie, i don't even bleed.. i try but hope is just not to- sucseed, it's passion with a frame of no wher to go, it's no wher to go with a hopless road that you allready know but still we go... still i think tho.. wich way to go.... [This message has been edited by ryun33 (08-01-2002 04:25 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, and continue to follow your hearts yellow brick road for your Emerald City lies just down the ways! This is an excellent debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! Welcome to Passions, dearest friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! As a member of the Passions Deputy Moderator Staff, I kindly ask you to consider editing the asterisked portion of profanity within the poem for a more milder word as profanity is mentioned in our Guidelines! We will all appreciate it very much, and we would be happy to help you with that if you'd like! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, also be sure to check your E-mail for a special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-01-2002 03:51 AM).] |
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ryun33 New Member
since 2002-07-20
Posts 8 |
oops sorrys for the ***'s i did'nt even realize that was ther, and thank you very much for the greeting, im looking forward to hangin out more often, it's such a bright and loving atmosphere! =) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Ryun... Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Jason Member
since 2002-07-31
Posts 72Macon, GA |
There's an interesting thought in there, ryun33. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with in the future. Keep it up, brother philosopher. Jason Practiced in the Art of Perception |
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