Open Poetry #21 |
Serenity's Wedding Day |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity’s Wedding Day As you see the morning stream Through slim shadows of your dream In kind accord before his eyes Your Wedding Day now realized… You have channeled, challenged, then Picked the pieces up again, Saw that freedom’s price was high And said to him, “You’re MY guy, You’ll see me through night and day Each of us shall have our say It won’t be easy, we’ve seen worse But our I Do’s have been rehearsed, And I shall love you as I do For through it all, we see true, Now is the moment, shall it be? Will you be my Eternity?” He shall bend over your fine hand Saying he is yours by God’s command The wedding day shall swirl to night And your world will be just right. ~*~ Have a wonderful Wedding Day August 1, Serenity. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what a lovely wedding poem for our Serenity Blaze.... I wish her tons of luck also... ~ chipmunk hugs to both of you Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! Congratulations Karen, and we all wish you and your love a happy marriage and future together forever filled with sunshine and flowers and magic! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet Karilea, this was very thoughtful of you to write such a touching poem to one of our dearest friends of Passions, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A dream that's shared by two, It's a feeling that keeps growing Whether love is old or new. Wishing you a day of warmth and beauty With magic in the air! A lifetime of love and happiness For both of you to share. ~ Luv & Hugs, Nancy ~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You wrote such a lovely heart thought for this marriage...I wish I had written it..so I'll just say, to Karen and her intended..me too! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is so beautiful and I'm sure they will be honored to have it for their wedding scrapbook. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!! tomorrow?? wowowowowow!!!! ohMY!!! did i say WOWOWOW yet? WOW!!!!i'm wowed by the news and the poem i wish the sereneOne a life of happiness wonderful writing karilea |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A most beautiful write, Karilea! Congratulations and heart-hugs Karen...I wish you the best as you surely deserve to be happy, respected and loved "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Awww Karilea, Serenity would feel so blessed to have a sweet friend like you. Love this beautiful tribute! mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now that's what I call going down in a blaze of glory! Best to ya, serene one! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Congratulations to our most serene one |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A wonderful tribute to a lucky couple! Cor |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Awww, wonderful poem, Sunshine. And good luck and happiness to you, Sen! *wink* Mikey Said if I only could ... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Congratulations, may it last forever! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
She's really going to do it? WOW Hey, K? CONGRATULATIONS & BEST OF LUCK e |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I had a few minutes, and I can't tell you how much this means to me. You are all so graciously loving. I thank you much. Kari? This is just SWEET. And? I'm kind of exhausted and dammit my nails are wet, so I shouldn't be typing--but hadta say thank you. pssst....who wants to kiss the bride? And? I guess I should type at least one blush, eh? if only to appease the gods of the obvious... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Gonna wear shoes AND gettin' married!!!!! Shouldn't this be a holiday for us all? He's a lucky guy, K. Ya'll have fun. Otherwise, what's the point? Don't answer that...lol. I |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Congratulation Serenity...it must be exciting...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I second that motion! Yes, a beautiful day it will be! Congrats! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Beautiful..... Congratulations!!! All the very best to you both hugs Maree |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, the big day's here already??? Congratulations and I hope it's everything you dreamed it would be. Have a wonderful, wonderful day Karen. You can never win or lose |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know youre going to be a beautiful bride baby...goddess stature for sure enjoy your special day...and then dance me twin!! Me thinks the party will pale Mardi-gras Love you KA [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (08-01-2002 10:32 AM).] |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You know how I feel Karen. May you find blessings in this union. Smile!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
does this mean I have to move out? (grin) good luck ms serene....and ms sunshine you did her nice here...dug it!! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Beautifully said SunShine ..... Best wishes to you Serenity. And may this one not require pokes in the eyes (inside joke for those who may not know, I'm not being mean) Good luck to you! ~Sheri |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
may your hands be heldfast to life and may your hearts be heldfast to being love shines where light cannot and being voices what mouths cannot say. . . congratulations. . . you know that I wish all the best my wonderful friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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*Sweet*n*sexy*0803* Junior Member
since 2002-08-01
Posts 10 |
That was a wonderful poem! *God has a purpose for sunshine and rain* |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
So when/where/why/how do we get the full report? Sen, e-mail me pwease? Or anyone who has any information ... Parched fr Knowledge Guy Said if I only could ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
When two are joined as one in light of day Within the shine of a sun for life to stay When both turn and softly speak of I do As others stand quietly wishing for you two Best to you Karen, and your lucky man... |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think the honeys may be mooning just now, BSQ... |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
A blessing so true from a Sunshiny gift Surely will give ol' Serenity a lift Much care and thought you gave in your present Under a moon, beaming from sharp yellow crescent Beautifully done, Sunshine. You get a major atta-gal for this gorgeous wedding gift! jeff |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh what a sweet wedding poem. And why do I never know what's going on around here?? Congrats, sweet Serenity. Sandra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Oops! I should have thought of that, Karilea! Said if I only could ... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She lost the battle And had to wear shoes But did they stay on After the "I do"s? LOL... This is beautiful, Sunshine... and I wish the new Mrs. every happiness in the world. *S* |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Wish all of the best and the happiest of love from all of PiP's rest to Serenity, so well thought of. Beautiful poem, Sunshine! Shenachie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling...a funny thing happened on the way to the altar... just kidding. But we DID get the a.o.l. bill right before we left (him wasn't happy) and yes, I wore SHOES. and stockings. and panties. AND A BRA. and a garter. in August. in NEW ORLEANS. (me wasn't happy) yes people, I wore a dress too...heh heh. But now? Mrs. Blaise is blissfully barefoot! and I love ya all, but methinks I'm going back to bed! talk to y'soon! ta ta. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Simplicity Awaken with memories resting in thought Stretch into the light of this day Love beating again..........within this......................morn as................................if all..............................can see..............................the one..........................and the.........................all of..............your simplicity. Mark Bohannan |
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Sunshine
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Mark...thank you so very much for adding a beautiful ring to the poem...the finishing touch...our Serene one will be pleased, if and when she ever gets out of the honeymooners room... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-02-2002 09:58 PM).] |
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