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No E's for Moi (Sven's Challenge)
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No E's for Moi (Sven's Challenge) |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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No E’s for Moi (Sven’s Challenge is too hard) Writing, avoiding your taboo, Discarding words forbid by you, Trying to say what I think Is hard to do without that link. Talking, avoiding your taboo, Casting out words I cannot do, Cannot do and cannot think How to talk without that link. Bring us back the missing link. Communication starts to stink. Lift thy ban and aid our thinking. If I cannot talk, I might start drinking. [This message has been edited by Bridget Shenachie (07-31-2002 07:41 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Change "the" to "thy" and thee has it! |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Done! Thanks Sunshine!  Shenachie |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
How very cute, Bridget... I enjoyed it very much...  ~ chipmunk hugs to theeLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh Bridget, this is just wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, yep, you sure worked around those potholes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridget, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shenachie...try once more... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bridget - not bad, not bad at all... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Not too shabby Bridg-t.......Nic po-m |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good stuff! Luv it.. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Thanks to all of you for reading and kindly commenting. Sunshine--can't do it again tonight. My pillow is calling for my cranium. Gotta catch my Z's. Shenachie |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this is good B. . . glad to know that Sun was looking out for you. . . amazing!! ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
This is really cute, Bridget. Pssst, i didn't notice the "the" until Sunshine pointed it out. Still, you deserve  !!mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Wonderful job! *s |
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