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Shimmering River
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Shimmering River |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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As we go over the bridge of the St. Johns river The sun beats down on it It looks like gold As the river shimmers In the sun Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ My goodness girlie ... are you on my back porch ? The St. Johns is a mighty river ... and is less than a heartbeat away from me~ Check your e-mail~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Julie...I believe this is one of your best, yet...! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Julie... I agree with Sunshine!!! This is good!!!  Neeraja |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very very beautiful, Julie.... superb imagery here.... a most excellent write...Please keep writing like this.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Definitely good. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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