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Open Poetry #21

Shimmering River

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-31 12:49 PM

As we go over the bridge of the St. Johns river
The sun beats down on it
It looks like gold
As the river shimmers
In the sun

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-07-31 12:59 PM

Julie~
My goodness girlie ... are you on my back porch ?
The St. Johns is a mighty river ...
and is less than a heartbeat away from me~
Check your e-mail~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-07-31 01:22 PM

Julie...I believe this
is one of your best, yet...!

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-07-31 01:30 PM

Julie... I agree with Sunshine!!! This is good!!!

Neeraja

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

4 posted 2002-07-31 01:40 PM

Very very beautiful, Julie....
superb imagery here....
a most excellent write...Please keep writing like this.

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ThunderMage
Senior Member

since 2002-06-20

Posts 812
Canada

5 posted 2002-08-01 02:44 PM

Definitely good.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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