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HopeS
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0 posted 2002-07-31 08:36 AM



Bacame My Friend

My pen wrote this way
Emotions tumbling out
Initially I was uncertain
I hesitated with doubt

Decided taking the risk
I hope you understand
Often I’m feeling fragile
Taking my pen in hand

I’ve torn lots of pages
Removed many a knife
On others paid tribute
Penned of stages in life

My pen I began to trust
Together we both stroll
Write of emotional trips
In windows of my soul

Dusts, wipes and clears
Often it arrives to mend
I can trust it in my heart
My pen became a friend

Hope ©2002



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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2002-07-31 08:40 AM


HopeS
You are a talented writer and always enjoy reading you.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2002-07-31 08:56 AM


Thank you Seymour , even after writing for around 5 years , I still have days of doubt but writing as helped
Hope

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