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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-30 05:46 PM



I'd dream of love, to wake alone
With tears upon my face
Remembering the love we shared
That time somehow misplaced


A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-30 05:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, I'm so sorry you feel this way, sweet friend, I too always dream of my love and wake up to be alone yet I pray to Him that I can have my Joanna soon and every day I feel our distant love grow so I feel hope really helps make love possible! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-07-30 10:05 PM


Kris~
Truly beautifully touching~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-07-30 11:33 PM


Such artistry in the power of few words.
Really liked this one especially. ThisDiamond

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4 posted 2002-07-30 11:48 PM


You know? I hate it when that happens. That part where you write in four lines, what it takes me a notebook to accomplish, maybe.

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

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