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Wonderbadger
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since 2002-07-29
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0 posted 2002-07-30 02:45 PM


Just round the corner just over the hill
Just out of site but you reach for it still
Just out of your league yet so far away
You're ignoring this fact and what others say
You know you can do it you just have to try
You're floating on air through clear blue sky
Because you have a dream you're targets' set higher
You reach for the stars with a burning desire
But reality bites it give you a kick
Your guts are churned up you start feeling sick
You're back on the ground with nothing to show
Your dreams are all shattered your hearts full of wo
But now you're back down It isn't all bad
How can you be happy if you've never been sad?

[This message has been edited by Wonderbadger (07-30-2002 02:46 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-30 02:46 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Annie765
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since 2002-07-29
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2 posted 2002-07-31 06:45 AM


I like this one, don't know why....maybe I can relate to some of the feelings expressed?
Any way  - love it !

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-07-31 06:46 AM


There are many expressions of feeling in this write, so many so true.  Well done. *s*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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