Open Poetry #21 |
to my left |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
to my left half moon rising in gold horizon along this pink road to nowhere yes pink I said a metamorphosed stone crushed in the climbing sky passing behind red lights flashing towering information warning half fades to green and will not reach zenith nor milky white before I find you not there somehow at nowhere © 073002 "Grab a pen, grab some paper, do yourself a little favor." e |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
And somehow you make it sound it is so write .... a vision unspared sir .... Well done! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Krawdad With just a few words you set the scene...then left me feeling lonely. Very emotive poem. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
vivid sight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad Symbols within symbols, enjoyed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
An enjoyable read which left me speechless. I'm keeping this to ponder, again...and yet again. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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