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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2002-07-29 10:55 PM


bizcard braggers at the brunch hall mall
like old maids and marmalade
some orange eye daylight
half past a dawn gone thirty

bimmer bummers in their bums
talkin about their wives
like the bertha equipment
and visa versa dirty

mouthing their dis-approval noise
of the metal riding boys
that play full contact golf
at the 19th in beefy tee's

with eagles and flags on sleeves
and dancers from nasty roy's
exotic pool and bar b que
happy hour daily from three to three


and tomorrow is a monday sunday


©Dark

© Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-29 11:01 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2002-07-29 11:02 PM


And I thought it was a bit late for you. Likes much, this peek into your clubhouse.

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

Bukowski

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2002-07-29 11:04 PM


loner....thanks mi amiga....you are too kind

wranx

tooo early perhaps..thanks my friend

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-07-29 11:14 PM


Mmmm, my eyes enjoy your work anytime Dark.
~slow night time hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-07-29 11:24 PM




(smiles) Wow, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I just love your unique style always, with you it is always happy hour here! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-07-30 06:35 AM



Sounds like 19th hole
wanderings...

Enjoyed the verbiaged visuals....

paladin
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since 2001-08-05
Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.
7 posted 2002-07-30 09:00 AM


Raw,brash.I dig it.

paladin

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
8 posted 2002-07-30 11:03 AM


DS

Colorful and effective with a bit of attitude.  Enjoy seeing through your eyes.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2002-07-30 12:04 PM


Dark Stranger
surprised you paid attention. Enjoyed

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
10 posted 2002-07-30 11:02 PM


Gosh..full contact golf..THAT is marketable..Loud noises required..you have my mind going now..Night poet man..Tuesday is sneaking up on my Monday.

Sincerely,
Reg

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