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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-07-29 10:03 PM


My heart unclasped of dangled chain
Adornment left here to remain.
Against my skin in absence of
the soft caress that once was love.

A clasping bond of most pure gold
to gird the heart and soul once cold.
The swing and sway of too and fro.
Releasing not, nor letting go.

But then again in ghostly stir,
adorns my heart inside so sure.
Against all odds beside me now.
The spirit holds me tight somehow.

A whisper from the dark of night
beyond the glow of candle's light.
Bestowing you an unseen touch.
A yearn, a need, a want of much.

This pair of hearts in trumpet sound,
adoring more to depths unbound.
Against my skin to signify
the strength of love that will not die.

Love is then born in flow of red
as two are one on silken spread.
Where chains of gold will then entwine
till darkness seeks our dawn in shine

She lead....and I humbly followed with
alternate Stanzas.... Thank You Kathy...


Copyright 2002 Magnus/ThisDiamond


[This message has been edited by Magnus (07-30-2002 10:39 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
1 posted 2002-07-29 10:04 PM


Beautiful collaboration...thunderous applause.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-07-29 10:08 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2002-07-29 10:11 PM


ThisDiamond and Barry - bravo, an excellent write together. This one is great!

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (07-29-2002 10:12 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-07-29 10:26 PM


Kathleen & Barry!!
Once again I am left speechless by such a wonderful duet!
Excellent piece of work here.
~Hugs to you both~

Martie
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5 posted 2002-07-29 10:32 PM


Barry and Thisdiamond

Very well done, in every way, beautiful!

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-07-29 10:40 PM


AWC...thanx much....Kathy is very easy to
compose with...she gives me so much to work
with..

Loner....you should try this some time.  I
think you would do just fine...

BC...you already know how easy it is to
write with this lady....thanx..

Nancy....thanx dear one and when are we gonna write again....

Martie...thanx dear lady,  and I am open
for you too,  any time you would care to
write one...

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-07-29 11:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I can tell you always have so much to work with and you two always come up with such beautiful compositions and symphonies of romantic passion! (BIG GROUP HUG) This is just beautiful, sweet friends, I LOVE IT, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Kathy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2002-07-29 11:38 PM


This is a beauiful pen.  Joyce
Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-07-30 12:49 PM


This is pure excellence, Kathleen and Barry...and
Barry, there is nothing humble about what you wrote...
~ hugs to both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Duncan
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10 posted 2002-07-30 01:01 AM


A whisper from the dark of night
beyond the glow of candle's light.
Bestowing you an unseen touch.
A yearn, a need, a want of much.

This pair of hearts in trumpet sound,
adoring more to depths unbound.
Against my skin to signify
the strength of love that will not die.

This is honestly one of the smoothest duets I have read.  Really liked it alot!


Sig strike in process...grab a sign and let's walk around in circles.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
11 posted 2002-07-30 05:15 AM


Hey you two did a superb job....exceptional read!
Magnus
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12 posted 2002-07-30 08:08 AM


Noah,  easy when you are given so much to
work from....thanx..

Joyce J.  Thank you very much for your thoughts.

Duncan......smooth words from a very smooth
lady who can give me so much to work with.
Thanx.

Lyra....Duet Hugs to you...thanx Madame C.

ET...thanx much.....we both enjoyed the
write...

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
13 posted 2002-07-30 10:51 AM


"This pair of hearts in trumpet sound" ...
I could hear your beautiful work just through the title,
superbly done!  (applause)

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
14 posted 2002-07-30 10:16 PM


Barry!
You have done a striking job once again!

It takes exceptional feeling and trust to compliment another artist...I have admired your work since I came to PIP, and I continue to learn more with every post.

Appreciate the way you accept my expressions, and elucidate them with such strength and gracious consideration. Enjoyed working with you very much.
Thank you everyone for your kind and complimentary support. ThisDiamond

suthern
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15 posted 2002-07-31 12:31 PM


I enjoyed this very much... you blend into a beautiful whole! *S*
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
16 posted 2002-07-31 12:56 PM



Magnus, you pick some pretty fine
duet partners...
what's your secret?

Neeraja
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17 posted 2002-07-31 01:39 PM


Pure pleasure!!!



Neeraja

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displaced
18 posted 2002-08-05 03:16 AM


what a combination!!!
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