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Chain of Hearts (A duet with ThisDiamond)
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Chain of Hearts (A duet with ThisDiamond) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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My heart unclasped of dangled chain Adornment left here to remain. Against my skin in absence of the soft caress that once was love. A clasping bond of most pure gold to gird the heart and soul once cold. The swing and sway of too and fro. Releasing not, nor letting go. But then again in ghostly stir, adorns my heart inside so sure. Against all odds beside me now. The spirit holds me tight somehow. A whisper from the dark of night beyond the glow of candle's light. Bestowing you an unseen touch. A yearn, a need, a want of much. This pair of hearts in trumpet sound, adoring more to depths unbound. Against my skin to signify the strength of love that will not die. Love is then born in flow of red as two are one on silken spread. Where chains of gold will then entwine till darkness seeks our dawn in shine She lead....and I humbly followed with alternate Stanzas.... Thank You Kathy... Copyright 2002 Magnus/ThisDiamond [This message has been edited by Magnus (07-30-2002 10:39 PM).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Beautiful collaboration...thunderous applause. ever deep...runs |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond and Barry - bravo, an excellent write together. This one is great! BC [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (07-29-2002 10:12 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen & Barry!! Once again I am left speechless by such a wonderful duet! Excellent piece of work here. ~Hugs to you both~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry and Thisdiamond Very well done, in every way, beautiful! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
AWC...thanx much....Kathy is very easy to compose with...she gives me so much to work with.. Loner....you should try this some time. I think you would do just fine... BC...you already know how easy it is to write with this lady....thanx.. Nancy....thanx dear one and when are we gonna write again.... Martie...thanx dear lady, and I am open for you too, any time you would care to write one... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I can tell you always have so much to work with and you two always come up with such beautiful compositions and symphonies of romantic passion! (BIG GROUP HUG) This is just beautiful, sweet friends, I LOVE IT, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Kathy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a beauiful pen. Joyce |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is pure excellence, Kathleen and Barry...and Barry, there is nothing humble about what you wrote...  ~ hugs to both of youLyra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A whisper from the dark of night beyond the glow of candle's light. Bestowing you an unseen touch. A yearn, a need, a want of much. This pair of hearts in trumpet sound, adoring more to depths unbound. Against my skin to signify the strength of love that will not die. This is honestly one of the smoothest duets I have read. Really liked it alot! Sig strike in process...grab a sign and let's walk around in circles. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey you two did a superb job....exceptional read! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, easy when you are given so much to work from....thanx.. Joyce J. Thank you very much for your thoughts. Duncan......smooth words from a very smooth lady who can give me so much to work with. Thanx. Lyra....Duet Hugs to you...thanx Madame C. ET...thanx much.....we both enjoyed the write... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"This pair of hearts in trumpet sound" ... I could hear your beautiful work just through the title, superbly done! (applause) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Barry! You have done a striking job once again! It takes exceptional feeling and trust to compliment another artist...I have admired your work since I came to PIP, and I continue to learn more with every post. Appreciate the way you accept my expressions, and elucidate them with such strength and gracious consideration. Enjoyed working with you very much. Thank you everyone for your kind and complimentary support. ThisDiamond |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much... you blend into a beautiful whole! *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magnus, you pick some pretty fine duet partners... what's your secret? |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Pure pleasure!!!  Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a combination!!! |
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