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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-07-29 08:42 PM



Cinderhymerella
~*Marge Tindal*~

Eleven-fifty
Almost Cinderella time
Hear the heart in chime
Slippered glass across the grass
Reaches the pumpkin in time


*Just playing with my new address number as inspire for a little Tanka*



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Samantha G Kennedy
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1 posted 2002-07-29 08:50 PM


Great title, great tanka!!

muchly enjoyed this

Sammie

^i^

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-07-29 08:57 PM


Samantha~
Thank you very much~
Welcome to Passions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-07-29 09:00 PM


Marge - I enjoyed this lots - Paul
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-29 09:02 PM


I loved this

Cold hands means a warm heart

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-07-29 09:39 PM


This is a wonderful tanka, Marge.
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6 posted 2002-07-29 11:06 PM


It's a tanka gas, Margie!
cpalmer
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7 posted 2002-07-30 12:36 PM


Love it!  
Hugs
Cindi

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8 posted 2002-07-30 05:58 PM


Marge:  This tanka is really cute and clever!

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2002-07-30 08:30 PM


From the land of castles and golden coaches, I send you a hearty "Cheers"!!!!
Wonderful, Marge!!!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Krissy
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10 posted 2002-07-30 09:06 PM


Auntie Margie girl I’m too often away from home to get the chance to reply to my favourites as often as I’d like. But I had to come back and reply to you. This is what I mean about the magic, and this is why YOU are such an inspiration to me. This is perfect and I love it

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-07-30 09:19 PM


GoodKnight~
Thanks ... just a little ink splash~

Loner~
Thank you gal~

SweetSuzieQ~
I appreciate it sweet lady~

Balladeer~
LOL ... you knew we had lima beans ... didn't you ?

Cindi~
Thanks sweetie ... always good to see you~

BettyLou~
I thought you'd enjoy it ....
I kind of like it too~

SunnyOne~
Gal ... it is GREAT to see you here~
Visited yours and hubby's web pages ... glad to see the lovely art you're doing ... I think I might just have found some great inspire there !!
Thanks for popping in gal~

Krissy~
And I'm thankful to be able to share what you refer to as 'magic' with you~
Every morning I sit outside and see our 1150 on the wall ... it just fit the Tanka of my mind ... so I ran with it~
Thanks sweet girl~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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