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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-06-14 08:28 PM

I was lost
when I opened the last door
I felt as though I had been here before
but it was not my destination
so I gave up
disguising what cannot be disguised
The torture of love
laments forever
never forgiving sins
My heart
once yours now roams
without regrets
sufficating in its own breath
not knowing if tomorrow
will exist
I can get used to this
the feeling of feeling nothing
but relieve
Strange
how love can hurt
to know what should have not be known
that is my pain
Sometimes
it's not liberating
to know the truth
I'm trap
forever in a feeling
of abandonment
with you right here by my side
Love
has been altered to a state
of unhapiness
brought on by distrust
and another's touch
A choice
made by you in a moment
when two heartbeats
was not enough
Broken
detached
by another's kiss
And along came sadness
opening the wrong doors
deserting me
in the middle of nowhere
in this cycle of lost

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2002-06-14 09:46 PM

This a most sobering tear. Beautifully expressed my friend. Good wishes. ThisDiamond

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2002-06-14 11:39 PM

I can get used to this
the feeling of feeling nothing
but relieve
Strange
how love can hurt
to know what should have not be known
that is my pain

Hey walker! Missed ya...glad you're back. Writing love and loss the way only you do!!

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-14 11:41 PM

I know how it feels. Been there. Good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

4 posted 2002-06-15 01:37 AM

"...Love
has been altered to a state
of unhapiness
brought on by distrust
and another's touch
A choice
made by you in a moment
when two heartbeats
was not enough..."

Ah, I love it when poetry touches me, as yours has touched me today...I wish you well in searching for Love. ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
increases sorrow...
Eccl. 1:18

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2002-06-15 02:33 AM

Walker
It's good to see you back here writing the poetic blues...This is exceptional!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2002-06-22 03:35 AM

hi Walker, I couldn't resist but to read your poem a couple of times b4 coming here2post a reply2u and now I'm speechless...
Truly, the expression is breathtakingly stunning...
Hugs2u...
*~coco~*

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