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Love in the Night
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Love in the Night |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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O' in the dark of night the stars do shine Warming all my thoughts, filling in my hole I long to hold you in those arms of mine I see within the darkness, hints of soul That carry me to the heavens above Though love all night can really take its toll You whisper softly in the rhymes of love As stars light up the night time, darkened sky I find in you a wondrous treasure trove You touch me in the dark and I can fly Making love at night while stars are glowing Within the glow of stars with morning nigh You whisper soft; fill my soul with leaven Take me to the stars and on to heaven Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - to the stars and on to heaven, love this... BC |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Just so lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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HeartSender New Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 5Virginia, USA |
This is a very deep poem And you have a way with words But I must ask something of you Give us more from what you have within yourself Let go of the passion you still hold back Try not to rhyme in words Yet rhyme in emotions Let your own emotions take over Let us see the love you have in side |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Kethry...thoroughly enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely, and interesting in form. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"You whisper soft; fill my soul with leaven Take me to the stars and on to heaven"   (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the whispers always sigh from the stars to your heart and shine with the most beautiful love of all, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a wonderful soaring love poem - lots of sensual images and feelings evoked here - very well written poetry - thanks Paul |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
sensually beautiful... mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words whispered softly, touched me Keth.. a lovely sonnet hugssss M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved heart sister and keeper of the dawns glory this is stunningly well written the way it flows from beginning to end is beautiful. That you write exceedingly well everyone acknowledges, when you write and you incorporate the starlight’s shimmer you positively shine with wonder. It is no secret that I adore your writing, some may think that I am a little too enthusiastic sometimes, but even they must realise that this is worthy of as much praise as I could heap on it. Light that flows with the liquidity of crystals streams of water, words that caress the soul with beauty, and phrasing and meter that puts masters of the art to shame, this is stunning and I love it utterly utterly utterly   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even before I read the responses, I'd gone back to read your poem again, just to enjoy your rhyme scheme. *S* This is excellent, Kethry... I like it very much. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A truly lovely love poem, Keth... ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb Keth. . . you really have the way with this, don't you?? ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You really are good yanno? |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Very nice thoughts If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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