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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
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0 posted 2002-07-29 03:52 PM


I'm sick of being alone
No one to call my girl and talk on the phone
I wanna be in love
With a girl I can truly say is mine
A girl I can call, Kick it with, and talk to anytime
I wanna be in love
With a girl that will treat me as her equal
A pure type of love, that is not corrupted by evil
We are soulmates in the truest form
In a cold world our love will keep us warm
I wanna be in love
With a beautiful black woman, who loves life
A woman I can forever call my wife
I just wanna be in love



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LilTai
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1 posted 2002-07-29 04:01 PM


I love this.

You'll find your queen..keep looking, but Love will always find you

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-07-29 04:02 PM


me too (Short reply)
devina
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Cali
3 posted 2002-07-29 04:16 PM


I don't think I've had the chance to welcome you here...but? I'm always the late one...

takes the longer part of your life me thinks..just to find *that one*

my fingers are crossed for ya hun!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2002-07-29 07:04 PM


Street Poet - it will happen when you lease expect it...

BC

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
5 posted 2002-07-29 07:05 PM


I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-07-29 07:06 PM


Good write!
Enjoyed very much.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

vandana
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7 posted 2002-07-29 07:08 PM


enjoy
ThunderMage
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8 posted 2002-07-29 07:11 PM


This is good.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-07-29 08:34 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Derek, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, I used to have these exact feelings as you, and felt I may have never had a girl, then, when I came here, I have fallen in love with the most beautiful girl to me and I know you will find that joy too, I promise! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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