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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-07-29 12:49 PM


It’s crazycool to pick up slang
                   from your bestest friend in the whole wide world
                   and think that he is so damned smart
                   and give him props
                   Big Big ups
                  
Listening to midnight stories about his brother
                   Who’s ten times ten times crazycool as he
                   I’m crying! I’m crying - to be like him
                  
His name is cool
and the subtle side of his damn ain’t given
                   and curses and spits and vulgarity
                   he might not be above
                   but he ain’t - in no way - mechanical
                  
His terms become “isms”
                   Give him one million dollars of which he wouldn’t take
                   He’d never promote alkyhal or anything for that matter
                   He’s crazy cool its his only rule
                  
The Father’s crazycool to him and he believes
I am too-
                   Crazycool
                  
To talk about dreams
in such extrapolation
                   that otherwise would be a bore
                   Sex and girls and tawdry things others wouldn’t want to hear
                   Things that lonely boys do under the goose down covers
                   and it’s ok to tell him, I love him-
                   His name is Crazycool.

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (07-30-2002 07:09 PM).]

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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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1 posted 2002-07-29 01:47 PM


funny!
crazycool best way to describe you
I'd say
likin yer flow,
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-29 04:35 PM


LOL! I needed a laugh.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sven
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3 posted 2002-07-31 05:02 PM


like I said before. . . good poetry needs to be read. . .

this is like, totally tubular waltie. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2002-07-31 10:33 PM


thank you all... Sven do you use any IM?
Corinne
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5 posted 2002-07-31 11:38 PM


Heya Walt - looks you're enjoyin' the new site!

Big ups, Bro.

Cor

cruz
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6 posted 2002-08-16 06:29 PM


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