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0 posted 2002-07-27 08:46 PM



From the center to the fringe
Glowing edges billowed singe
Returning changed to gather might
These winds that alter and unite

To take the old swept miles out
Cast of slumber, galed of doubt
Returning rain in clear cascade
These winds to vanquish fragments laid

Through the circles in full blown
Deposits gathered, swept and sown
Returning balanced latitudes
These winds of changing attitudes

From the center circles wide
Scattered tempos in collide
Returning to this rhythm mild
These winds transformed as dawn has smiled

Copyright Kkh 7/27/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-27 08:54 PM


Very nice! Cleansing!

I liked your site too!

Kris

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2 posted 2002-07-27 09:38 PM




YAY!!! I love the atmosphere of this, sweet friend, it's like rejuvenation, like the laundry of nature, this is filled with such peace and vibrance, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-27 09:57 PM


OK Kathy.....seems the laundry has been
washed and it is time for the dryer....
(grin).....   Seriously,  like the
message of this piece....about changes and
attitudes...seemingly also a little about
turmoil....  Bout ready for another twosome?

I am....

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