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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-07-27 05:35 PM


Hello Heartache
I see that you are back again
Looks like your planning
To stay for more than
Just the weekend

Why can't I just
Slam the door
in your face
Instead I always
Invite you back in
Offer my bed

Sacrifice my dreams
To lay on the couch
Tossing and turning
Thinking once again
Of the endless nights
And how hard I tried
To push you away

You always seem to catch
Me off guard
So Hello heartache
My old friend
I should have believed you
When you said
You would be back again....


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1 posted 2002-07-27 05:42 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all and I can say it is inevitable we all have times of heartache but joy is also inevitable and you are bound to find it! (kiss on cheek) Keep your chin up, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tea Lady
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2 posted 2002-07-27 05:42 PM


Now that's the truth.  ~smiling~  This touches upon many truths and is written with a smooth grace.  I liked that!
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-07-27 08:14 PM


Ceinwyn - that darned one always seems to come back to haunt. Best to you...

BC

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2002-07-27 09:12 PM


A smartly written slap to the taunts of heartache...nicely done. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-07-28 01:58 AM


ooooh  I know what you mean still I suppose its always better when he packs up and leaves

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-07-28 09:22 AM


Ceinwyn~
Poignantly sad emotion poured down the page~

Nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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