Open Poetry #21 |
Hello Heartache... |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Hello Heartache I see that you are back again Looks like your planning To stay for more than Just the weekend Why can't I just Slam the door in your face Instead I always Invite you back in Offer my bed Sacrifice my dreams To lay on the couch Tossing and turning Thinking once again Of the endless nights And how hard I tried To push you away You always seem to catch Me off guard So Hello heartache My old friend I should have believed you When you said You would be back again.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all and I can say it is inevitable we all have times of heartache but joy is also inevitable and you are bound to find it! (kiss on cheek) Keep your chin up, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tea Lady Junior Member
since 2002-07-11
Posts 26 |
Now that's the truth. ~smiling~ This touches upon many truths and is written with a smooth grace. I liked that! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ceinwyn - that darned one always seems to come back to haunt. Best to you... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A smartly written slap to the taunts of heartache...nicely done. ThisDiamond |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ooooh I know what you mean still I suppose its always better when he packs up and leaves If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ceinwyn~ Poignantly sad emotion poured down the page~ Nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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