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sodpossom
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0 posted 2002-07-27 12:52 PM


A daisy peering out of some weeds
surrounded by ugliness
Yet her beauty still shines
with a sense of hope
she can escape
her fruitless habitat.

© Copyright 2002 Stevie Houston - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-07-27 12:54 PM


sodpossom
Much to think about, enjoyed

Samantha G Kennedy
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Kent England
2 posted 2002-07-27 01:49 PM


i find this adorable in its simplicity....beauty always shines through


brava, loved this

Sammie

^i^

N orth Carolina Girl
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3 posted 2002-07-27 01:50 PM


Stevie,
This just goes to show that beauty can shine through.This was really good!

Love you!

Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-07-27 01:51 PM


a poem with lots to ponder even though it is short - loved it and will read it again and again - Paul
Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-07-27 04:39 PM


It reminds me just a bit of Cindarella, Stevie...


the beauty of the daisy, surrounded by the ugliness of the weeds.

I happen to love weeds, though...but thats probably because I'm a chipmunk
~ weed eating chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

sodpossom
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6 posted 2002-07-27 06:20 PM


Thank Seymour!
sodpossom
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7 posted 2002-07-27 06:21 PM


Samantha

Thanks.I guess I am a pretty simple guy.

sodpossom
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8 posted 2002-07-27 06:22 PM


Mama

Thanks!

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