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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-27 05:32 AM

A Night With No Armor

there shall
one day be
a night
with no armor
and no need
to be
exhausted
fire breathers
no distress
and lances lay
where hearts melt
and not
thrust into
excalibur stone
where we
can find
magic within us
and our realm
is close
to Camelot
there shall
one day be
a night
with no armor

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2002-07-27 05:43 AM

Armorall?  ....  Maybe some Windex....

Slick,  you gone and touched one of my
favorite Knerves (pun).....  Yes, maybe
one day, huh? A night with no armor...

Up this early?

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-07-27 07:55 PM

May peace reign

No armor
No steel just cotton
the finest silk threads
To drape her
Battle forgotten
Conflicts are shed.
The swords
Are sheathed away
To dark closets hung,
And words
At last rule the day
Time of peace begun

Gloom

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-07-27 08:10 PM

helen - if the night came to one with a softer heart, would the arrow still pierce it?

BC

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

4 posted 2002-07-27 08:46 PM

in a nutshell, splendid!
I hope to see that night

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2002-07-27 09:14 PM

Really enjoyed this one...What a wonderful theme...no defenses. Bravo. ThisDiamond

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2002-07-27 11:13 PM

A cool write, Helen...if only one day maiden's walls will crumble and knight's armour will melt...if only...
I'm keeping this one

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

7 posted 2002-07-27 11:16 PM

Very well done and clever write!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

8 posted 2002-07-28 01:39 AM

awww i luv this 1 i like the camalot stories

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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