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Sultry Afternoon
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Sultry Afternoon |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise 
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 On white sand being tenderly caressed by the waves of the sea. footprints in the sand barefooted sensual pleasure being wet. feeling something special happening between you and I embraced by the sea Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (07-27-2002 03:08 AM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You make one believe, Cheryl... and that is a very good thing! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Cheryl, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may the beauty of the ocean continue to bring great light and comfort of love to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
something special happened to me as I read this wonderful pome - ah... the sea is a wonderfully inviting metaphor and you sue it well - thanks for a great poem - Paul |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
That does it...I am packing to find my paradise island!! This is beautiful, and the pic is captivating, and if you actually live there, you are soooooooo lucky!!!!! Thank you for getting my gypsy blood moving again!!! LOL!!! Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - this is good, this is good! I'm on the way, just point me in the right direction... BC |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Makes me dream of my own Bali Hai.Someday It will call me. paladin |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
I read this, looked at the picture again, read the poem again, then sat for 20 minutes daydreaming I loved it Tai |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
wow ! thanks to one and all for enjoying this hot afternoon poem...it truly fits the day here in Hawaii...whew hot weather!...I think that picture might actually be from Tahiti. Thanks to all for taking time to read my scribbles and comment!  Poetry is: |
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