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Maverick Wolf
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0 posted 2002-07-27 01:47 AM



I was given the key
I put it in the slot
And turned it
All without thinking

Now I am wondering
If I’d do it again
If I never started it
I’d be able to sleep now

© Copyright 2002 Jason Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-27 01:32 PM


Jason~
This is intriguing~
I can't help but wonder what your 'key' fit ?

You kind of rewound some memories for me of my music box collection ... and also an old diary that I used to keep under lock and key~

Thank you for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-07-27 01:35 PM


this is a very interesting poem and leads one to remember all those things tried and then wondered about as to whether they would be tried again - thanks for a very good poem - Paul
Samantha G Kennedy
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Kent England
3 posted 2002-07-27 01:42 PM


this reads interesting ~ and although short does make the reader think

great short verse!


Sammie

^i^

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-07-27 01:46 PM


what is causing your sleeples nights???
The key to what....
questions... maybe answered   maybe not
~~ Connie ~~

Pilgrimage
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5 posted 2002-07-28 02:05 AM


Well, I would. But, probably I shouldn't.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Furie
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6 posted 2002-07-29 09:25 AM


Interesting rumination.
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