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Sleepless Thoughts |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
I was given the key I put it in the slot And turned it All without thinking Now I am wondering If I’d do it again If I never started it I’d be able to sleep now |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jason~ This is intriguing~ I can't help but wonder what your 'key' fit ? You kind of rewound some memories for me of my music box collection ... and also an old diary that I used to keep under lock and key~ Thank you for sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is a very interesting poem and leads one to remember all those things tried and then wondered about as to whether they would be tried again - thanks for a very good poem - Paul |
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Samantha G Kennedy Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131Kent England |
this reads interesting ~ and although short does make the reader think  great short verse! Sammie ^i^ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
what is causing your sleeples nights??? The key to what.... questions... maybe answered maybe not ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well, I would. But, probably I shouldn't. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Furie Junior Member
since 2002-06-17
Posts 39Myriad of Unkown Places |
Interesting rumination. |
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