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LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-14 02:03 PM

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if our love is chocolate
then i have a sweet tooth
and you own the candy store

but before that
you were the moon
and i the stars
and our love was the sky

if i am a rose
then you are my rain
and our love is the sun

if our love is eternal
then i wear the watch
and you are father time

if our love is true
then i will raise my right hand
as will you
as we repeat
together
"i love you"

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-06-15 04:08 PM

Like these thoughts...James

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-06-15 07:38 PM

Tai,
you make love sound so perfect, thanks for posting this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

3 posted 2002-06-15 08:32 PM

but before that
you were the moon
and i the stars
and our love was the sky

This is the way love should be...you have captured it perfectly, Tai...

~ hugs for a lovely poem

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

MidnightSon
Member

since 2002-05-15

Posts 312
between the gutter & the stars

4 posted 2002-06-15 09:26 PM

a great theme and idea.
and beautiful metaphors.

it's our struggle for identity that leaves us all unknown

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-06-15 09:27 PM

I am just speechless.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2002-06-16 05:56 PM

Beautiful...

~R.T.

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2002-06-16 06:14 PM

Beautiful words of love.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

8 posted 2002-06-16 07:29 PM

Oh, thank you all so much! You're all too sweet

*hugs* Thanks!

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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