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My Breath
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My Breath |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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My Breath you stir me in gentle touch and move through me like a wind song in it’s breeze leaves release your name and teaches a melody that I turn into a song to practice over and over again till I ease back into my breath |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Sigh me a song Although wordless I’ll sing along Moan me a melody In dreaming Perhaps reality Dance in the shadows Avoiding sight And open windows Write me a rhyme To enjoy From time To time Gloom |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Simply breath taking. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Nice. Very nice. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a fine poem this is!!! Neeraja |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
Very interesting indeed. The verse is very well written, but the image that the words create on the page is very interesting too. Coincidence? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - sing on the song from your breath... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, may you always breathe with ecstasy and recite songs of bliss forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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