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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-26 01:03 AM



My Breath


you stir me
in gentle touch
and move
through me
like a wind song
in it’s breeze
leaves release
your name
and teaches
a melody
that I
turn into
a song
to practice
over and over
again
till I ease
back into
my breath


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2002-07-26 07:53 AM



Sigh me a song
Although wordless
I’ll sing along
Moan me a melody
In dreaming
Perhaps reality
Dance in the shadows
Avoiding sight
And open windows
Write me a rhyme
To enjoy
From time
To time


Gloom


Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-26 11:22 PM


Simply breath taking.
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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3 posted 2002-07-27 01:28 AM


Nice. Very nice.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
4 posted 2002-07-27 01:55 AM


What a fine poem this is!!!

Neeraja

Maverick Wolf
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since 1999-11-13
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5 posted 2002-07-27 02:07 AM


Very interesting indeed.  The verse is very well written, but the image that the words create on the page is very interesting too.  Coincidence?
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-07-27 02:34 PM


helen - sing on the song from your breath...

BC

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7 posted 2002-07-27 05:25 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, may you always breathe with ecstasy and recite songs of bliss forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! Youn have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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