Open Poetry #21 |
Belle (Pers. challenge tag thingy) #3 |
wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
serenity tags Anvrill, Anvrill tags wranx etc. etc. "Belle" (the one that I should have never let get away) This should satisfy my obligation. Working on another, (1st) may or may not finish it. _________________________________________________ Belle I was at my best, when I was with Belle She said that she thought me handsome And against all laws of nature I was transformed into someone That even I had to admit Was passably pleasant looking She told me once that I was an artist And I became infused with a new creativity Inspiration and direction came easily When she told me that I was generous I became comfortably philanthropic With my time, money and effort She would say that I was loving And indeed, I did love her I was truly at my best with her I wish, now, that Belle had called me devoted Or told me that I was faithful Or that she would be all that I would ever need Or that she hadn’t said goodbye ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... is sometimes, intolerable. Bukowski [This message has been edited by wranx (07-26-2002 02:34 PM).] |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
mmm, mmm ,mmm BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice one Wranx! Purdy!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so sad |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
awww...guy...haven't we all wanted so much more...seems to me I've had to *pretend* not to want to actually get...sighs to me... and this: "I was transformed into someone That even I had to admit Was passably pleasant looking" I picture you struttin proud as a rooster here...chest puffed out and all... you did that on purpose, no?? Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
So sad Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
*sigh* Sorry to've stirred such things. Beautiful, sad poem. written in blood before everything went black |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
wranx To look back and understand, means that you are wise. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow... I love yr mind, wranx! And this humanity. She said burn ... together. |
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