Open Poetry #21 |
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Nothing is What it Seems |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind ![]() |
Nothing is what it seems And yet I wander on in life Living, yet not alive. I see faces So many smiling and normal And I wonder Why can't that be me? I am trapped Nothing is normal Reality is a dream I do not comprehend I will never comprehend Maddening! Screaming! Crying to be heard! Why am I never heard? These walls that contain me Drown me, weaken me I am nothing here But then what is nothing When nothing is what it seems? Now who can tell that I just finished a psych rotation???LOL! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How's it going, anyway! You've been gone far too much, and I would read some more... PLEASE???? |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ It is sooooooo good to see you~ Yikes ... sounds like the psych rotation was a little rough~ You write of it so well. Stay ... we've missed you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hi Sunshine and Marge! Thanks for responding, I appreciate your comments. It's good to pop in and check out some good poetry, while I am supposed to be writing my research paper. LOL!--This is my sanity break. Things are going well, and I just may pop in more, in between semesters. Thanks again--this forum is wonderful ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
mariee66 - perhaps at times nothing is what it seems, but then perhaps at times it is... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Marie! Enjoyed so much! Stop by more often so we can see more of your writing. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO!!! Oh Marie, I love the psychological winding twist in this, sweet friend, this is excellent, sometimes nothing feels like something but it takes something to find out what that nothing is! (sigh) This is wondferful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Wow! Thanks for the replies, so very much! Angel--I am glad you found the twist. I was afraid it would be missed. (that sort of rhymed, eh?) |
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