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Tenderly
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Tenderly |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Tenderly Love me tenderly, yet.... With the passion of a full moon’s light With the intensity of a star’s flame With.....your heart as I will you... Wake me... To the warmth of your touch The feel of your breath against my face A moan from deep within as I will you... Take me... To the heights of snow capped peaks To the valleys lush with flora.. To our place....that only we know as I will you... For in your arms, in your grasp I am whole.... Love me tenderly... as I will you... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this melts wax...WOW !!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Slick....just one of those moods right now....felt this was appropriate.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, You old romantic you, enjoyed. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
well made me run to the frig for an ice tea.......whoaaaaaaaaaaa....keep writing this way...it is hot hot HOT |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sy....Yep, guess I am...huh? Vandana....thank you....enjoyed your words.. take care... Slick....better get a fresh tea.....I am brewing up another one.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh gosh, this is just so, so hot! WOW! What a great romantic write. Phew! Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Very sensual..and I apologize my spelling just went on vacation I think my muse took it with her to the bahamas or even alaska who knows! but Loved it!! Kristen |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...what Helen said so succinctly... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You have become quite the *item* in here while I was away!!! smiles... love this extra romantic side of you Barry... *sighs* along with the rest!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - tender indeed is the moment. Lovely verse, tenderly said... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marti.....thank you....just felt a tender moment was in order tonite.... Kristen...pleased that you enjoyed this little piece.... Sun...YOU KNOW I always enjoy your words... Thanx shining one.... Hi BC...welcome back to Passions...Hope you are well... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OOOOPS...Devina...almost forgot ya....surely I could never forget you with all of your smiling words that make me grin from ear to ear and back again... Item? Me? hmmmmm?? |
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