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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2002-07-25 05:48 AM


Si vous touchez
un arbre,
vous êtes
un arbre

    If you touch
    a tree
    you are
    a tree


    You are the bark
    the branches
    the leaves
    the roots


    It is your hair
    your skin
    your eyes
    your heart


volonte vous touchez
mon amour

   Will you touch
   my love?

©Dark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-25-2002 05:59 AM).]

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Severn
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1 posted 2002-07-25 06:54 AM


Different from what I've come to expect from you...I like it..

different languages can work well sometimes..

K

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-07-25 07:03 AM


Dark Stranger
Bulls eye, excellent.

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-07-25 07:22 AM


very unique concept..and  lovely & romantic

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2002-07-25 08:33 AM


severn, thanks ms, I fell off the other side of the puppy shed this am and was suddenly in a whole new world (grin)


friend sy, thanks to you sir.  sure glad you are back amigo.


csk, thankins to yaz..romantica needs to be simple sometimes...just a whisper perhaps.

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-07-25 08:50 AM


Morning Dark ~
Lovely...softly sensual..
and I do love anything you say in another language.
~slow hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2002-07-25 09:35 AM


volonte vous touchez
mon amour...

oui, monsieur, merci

si seulement aux mes rêve

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2002-07-25 09:37 AM





Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Martie
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8 posted 2002-07-25 10:02 AM


Good morning, DS

To touch is to become a part of what you touch...what a lovely concept, especially when speaking of love.  

Going outside now to be a tree.

WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon
9 posted 2002-07-25 10:03 AM


Since I'm new here I can't say it's not what I expect from you. But it's well written and I enjoyed the read.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (07-25-2002 10:04 AM).]

rwood
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10 posted 2002-07-25 10:56 AM


Les cieux arrosent l'arbre à condition que l'amour abonde sur le sien parte et il se développe profondément dans moi.

With spirit..

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-07-25 10:57 AM


enchantress...........
thanks to you ms, may my language be
heard as whispers to you


Sunshine, coffee is on the way...had to fly to the andes to pick some special buds..(whoops) beans...thanks for the dreamy way you reply ms

Lauren, I enjoy your little round things (grin)  thanks babe


Ms martie, thanks neighbor lady, morning hugs to you.  am glad you like this.


White Rose, thanks to you new person, welcome to passion.. so pleased to capture your eyes

Regina, laissez-moi toucher votre esprit lentement
              soyons ciel d'arbre?  thanks hon
  

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-25-2002 11:37 AM).]

rwood
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12 posted 2002-07-25 11:16 AM


Oui. Le ciel est la limite de l'arbre du touchez.

Answer perhaps? Smile at you.

Sincerely,
Me


Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2002-07-25 11:40 AM


Regina..

you make me cravy (wink)
will be over as soon as I get my tree climb shoes on...wear your sky smile today?

thanks again hon

Mistletoe Angel
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14 posted 2002-07-25 11:14 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I always love when you express romance in romantic languages, sweet friend, I love Latin and love writing poems in it too, this made me smile wide, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

devina
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Cali
15 posted 2002-07-25 11:17 PM


you make it sound so *easy* sweet man...

what a beautiful notion DS...

and me? of course~ I like it!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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