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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-07-25 05:05 AM


Little Kids

He found himself living
far away from his home
and his sons.

He wanted
another chance.
He didn't really deserve one.

Shame on fathers that don't know
how to love their wives.
That break up their family.
That screw up little kids lives.

JamesLee
July23
2002


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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
1 posted 2002-07-25 07:16 AM


awwwwwwwww James...a sad write...

aloha
Cheryl

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2 posted 2002-07-25 10:35 PM


Shame, indeed!  Nice work, James.
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3 posted 2002-07-25 10:36 PM


JM...very true....I was fortunate to have
a father who was always there....

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-25 10:36 PM


How sad

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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5 posted 2002-07-25 10:37 PM


How sad does it get?

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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6 posted 2002-07-25 10:38 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh James, this is so sad but true, sweet friend, my heart goes out to all the kids whose fathers abandon them and I pray though they may always feel that emptiness they can find new hope and love! (sad sigh) This made my heart cry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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