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MomentzBefore
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since 2002-07-22
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0 posted 2002-07-24 06:27 PM


I felt the sunlight in my face
It was like the first time we touched
When you pulled me close
I held my breath for what I wanted so much
I was afraid to look into your eyez
Afraid that I would get lost and not find my way out
Would it be so bad to get lost in you?
Isn't that what love is all about?
That warm feeling...
Yes it feels good
I knew I shouldn't
But in the end I knew I would

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2002-07-24 06:28 PM


I like it

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-24 08:26 PM




(sigh) This is a touching and lovely poem, sweet friend, I love the sensitive feel of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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