Open Poetry #21 |
sub rosa epitaph (for ethome) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Beneath the petals of the rose-- I find reprieve from whispered fall... beneath the petals of the rose ears of trust listen to all... Velvet shelter from the rain-- shade from sun's burning the pain... A petal of a blanket--sweet... the thing that stops the you from "me." Sub Rosa... holds my secret sighs... sub rosa? Death shall tell no lie. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wowsa!!!! Luscious is on a roll... great read Hon |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Awww! I'm no longer sub rosa I'm thrilled with this writing! Some lucky guy's gonna get a southern belle all to himself. Gonna have his hands full, you know what I mean...........you're a jewell Celeste! I'm glad you explained the epitath like only you can do! I unnerstan now! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Yes!! Excellent! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Velvet shelter from the rain-- shade from sun's burning the pain... A petal of a blanket--sweet... the thing that stops the you from "me." That pretty well said it. |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Beautiful words from a beautiful poetess, what more can a guy ask for? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ You 'knew' I would ... and I do ! Stunning~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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