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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-14 04:59 AM



Beneath the petals of the rose--
I find reprieve from whispered fall...
beneath the petals of the rose
ears of trust listen to all...

Velvet shelter from the rain--
shade from sun's burning the pain...
A petal of a blanket--sweet...
the thing that stops the you from "me."

Sub Rosa...
holds my secret sighs...
sub rosa?
Death shall tell no lie.

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2002-06-14 05:11 AM


Wowsa!!!!

Luscious is on a roll... great read Hon

ethome
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2 posted 2002-06-14 06:06 AM


Awww!  I'm no longer sub rosa I'm thrilled with this writing!

Some lucky guy's gonna get a southern belle all to himself.
Gonna have his hands full, you know what I mean...........you're a jewell Celeste!

I'm glad you explained the epitath like only you can do!
I unnerstan now!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-14 09:00 AM


Oh Yes!!  Excellent!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-06-14 09:05 AM


Serenity,
Velvet shelter from the rain--
shade from sun's burning the pain...
A petal of a blanket--sweet...
the thing that stops the you from "me."
That pretty well said it.

bags123
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5 posted 2002-06-14 09:08 AM


Beautiful words from a beautiful poetess, what more can a guy ask for?
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-06-14 09:12 AM


Serenity~
You 'knew' I would ... and I do !
Stunning~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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