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Just One Ticket Away...
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Just One Ticket Away... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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The man I love lives just one ticket away… but for me it’s the same as a ticket to the moon… inaccessible all because a bunch of laws called bureaucracy… and now time is slipping away while our love grows into an almost unbearable longing… |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja Succinct and to the point. Enjoyed |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed Cold hands means a warm heart |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
ive been there before.. that person that just seems like they are so close but yet so far away.... good post.. keep writing |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Bittersweet!Nice job! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I know exactly how you feel because I love my dream girl Joanna so so much yet she lives so far away and I am scared I may never get to see her! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It's amazing how much influence distance actually has on our relationships... no matter how hard we fight it or pretend that it isn't there... it still hangs there like an impenetrable barrier.  ~ hugs from a distanceLyra |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Bittersweet descrbes it well.  Thank you for the write. Sincerely, Titus "They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..." |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
True love knows no time or distance. paladin |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
It is such a comfort... to read all the sweet comments on my poems... I appreciate it a lot!!! Thank you so much!!! Neeraja |
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